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he asked "your legs,
why do you shave?"

i thought
"because
matt in 7th grade
teased
they looked
manlike

because
society says
the skin should
be soft and
smooth"

i replied, "when
at night i slip
between the sheets
freshly shaved
it feels

nice"

he kissed me
Remember 'fling'?

...

Probably not. It didn't seem to be well-liked.

Same boy. Same time. Same feelings.

What happens when you're not the one he wants?

Be careful what you say...
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I like it...its very innocent and intimate at the same time, a small snippet of conversation between two that are possibly getting to know each other...an icebreaker of sorts.

Its easy to read, and flows smoothly. You can feel the shyness slipping away as its read...nice work!

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